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September 22, 2008
by Marie Rennard
Polesy (Polésie) **
(Swans - September 22, 2008)
The moon was on the sill
Held by a shape of roof,
As quiet as street lamps.
Dark ponds were reflecting shadows
- In the backyard
It was smelling dead fish.
A fat homunculus
Was playing saxophone
As a revenge on God
The melody
Was subdued
And somewhat doleful
His own shadow was dreaming him a giant
Hoarse voiced
Thin shaped and elegant.
A bow tied cat
Was watching at the wall
He fell in love with sounds
With the light and shadow
They got married
And although they could not have kids
They were happy.
But after a year
The fussy cat had to admit
He couldn't stand the smell
And he made away with the saxophone.
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